Another poem, any insight?

Load the miracle Say my good byes Bite down on the barrel Slowly shut my eyes Say my prayers Pull the trigger Hear the bang Hear nothing at all Wake up People around me Crying, whispering Aknowladging me Im still here And I still cant win. Imprisoned by the begining Longing for the end

Answer #1

an amazingly supirior to any other liturature piece I have heard in long period of time! Overall 10/10!

DO NOT SUCCUM TO THE APPRESSION OF EMOTION!!!

xoxox

Answer #2

wow is all I can say!

Answer #3

OMG!! I LUVE IT!!! what ELSE DO UHAVE?!?!?!

Answer #4

I like it a lot its reallt deep but it makes sense, your an AWESOME writer :]

Answer #5

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW your AWESOME

Answer #6

wow. THat’s deep. YOu rock.

Answer #7

plesa, send me more!!! I already wrote a poem like it.

Answer #8

you rock girl

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