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What do you think of my poem about bullying?

I hated going to school I wouldnt tell nobody why I used to lock myself up in my bedroom And cry myself to sleep I hated being alone cause I’d knew There’d come for me, pushing and bashing Me agaisnt the walls, I never knew how I’d get out of this It was a daily thing id come home with bleeding lips But run straight to my room so nobody knew But know im out of this pain, because I told someone About it, they helped me and now im happy as I could ever be, And I will return the favours, to everybody whos being bullied out there.

I havent experinced this. But this stuff do happen to people everyday And its to show by telling one person You can get help!

Written by me.

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Answer #1

I think essays are better to talk about bullyin’ then a poem. And the writing is not that good.

That aside, it looks pretty nice. And it’s pretty awesome to find people that actually care.

If you have any music talent (or if you know any friend that does), I suggest turning this into a music. With a medium speed beat on an acoustic guitar, I’d sound great.

Answer #2

yeah I am writing a poem about bullying too…urs is amazing but it needs revising and “fixing” little bit…other wise its amazing!

Answer #3

That was off the fudging hook,amazing,I would have any person in schools every that are being bullied read this,this may encourage them to take a stand. Awesome job.

Answer #4

It dont rhyme soo it not that easy to understaaand :(

Answer #5

thanks :)

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