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Title: unknown. My poem, you like?

Ok well first I wanna say sorry j have been asking so many quiestions lately it’s just my mind is boggoling full of em and all kinds to. So yea any ways yea my question: ok tell me whta you think of my poem please and be honest am not judgemental ok I wrote this for two kuzns of mine one is in jail the other is in juevy sorry if I spelled that wrong ok but here it goes. Oh I don’t have a title for it either kan you help me with that to please? Thank you! :).

I love you You mean the world to me Your my fam Your my kuz The memories The fun The smart The dumb Haha we laughed, A ton! These things I will never forget These things I will never regret.

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Uhm. Its…kay. lol I mean its like my honest opinion right, im not trying to hurt your feelings or anything cause I think you have potential. OK. It doesn’t really make sence.It doesn’t sound that good…Sorry. But don’t stop writing poems. You have potential. If you don’t want my honest opinion then, OMG it was beautiful the way the lyrics flowed the way the words tickled my mouth when I read it. It was wonderful! xoxo

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