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What are your thoughts on this poem; I wrote it out of rage, so ...?
I don’t know whats been going on. I just haven’t been my self. I’m sorry if that makes you upset. Just because I may be quiet. Doesn’t mean I’m depressed. Or something is wrong. It just simply means I don’t want to talk. Or their is nothing to talk about. We’ve been such good friends. So why do we keep fighiting? Over nothing, nothing at all. They’re all pointless. So why do we keep having them? I love you, no matter what. Even though it may not seem like it. You’ve helped me through allot. And I’ve done my best to help you. Truth is, with out you. I probably wouldn’t be here. Which is why I don’t want to lose you. Even though, it seems as if I am. So good bye. If we never talk again. just know I love you. I really do you’ve been the best.
aww i love this.. =P
I like this. It’s really understandable. :D
Really?
I wrote it in like 2 mins…
I like this. :)
This is really good(:
I really like it. Very simple but straight to the point. You’ve managed to express your feelings in a simple yet passionate way :)
Its so good. I love it:)
Thanks <3
No prob. :)
Thats really good! :)
It’s very good, and very heartfelt. I like how every line is short with a period at the end, it makes everything sound so clipped and final.
Something i can actually relate to!
It’s an emotional piece, without any frills - that makes it good. However, allow me to be the voice of reason here, but the spelling/grammatical errors really take away from the message - I found myself dwelling on those more than the actual words, and I had to go back several times to take it all in. If you can correct those, it would take “good”, and turn it into “great”. You seem to have a knack for speaking what’s really in your heart as opposed to trying to come up with some sort of metaphorical statement for your feelings. Keep up the good work.
yeah its really sweet, but you can understand what your trying to say :)
thanks <3
I like this a lot :) it’s very good
That’s really awesome!
It’s epic!!!
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