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Brave Soldier - Do you like my Poem?

Do you like my poeM/ Please answer truthfully.

Brave Soldier

With a gun in their hand, Praying not to cry, They fight for our country, hoping not to die. We love them a lot, thousands lost each year, It’s hard to say you won’t give them a tear.

Being givin a flag On the day he dies, It’s hard to hold back, with tears forming in your eyes.

You pray everyday, at morning and night. To make sure those soldiers are alright. You look up to heaven, And fall right to sleep. Your Brave Soldier can sure make you weap.

PLEASE…PLEASE DO NOT TAKE THIS FROM ME> THIS IS MINE ONLY AND I MADE THIS.

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Answer #1

This poem is amazing. You are an amazing writer.. though I have only read this one poem. So, I can’t exactly say much. But this poem is really good. Good work :)

Answer #2

Wow that’s good, it has a lot of emotion to it I like it

Answer #3

wow! I love that poem. I have a cousin that I am really close to that is in iraq and I do pray for him every day. you are really good at writing poems.

Answer #4

that’s really good… my brother is in the army and I miss him so much… your poem has so much truth to it.

Answer #5

That’s an awesome poem

Answer #6

I love this and please check out my song in education and school on second page called War War War

Answer #7

wow thats really good !

Answer #8

love it

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