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Do you like this poem?

Please listen to these words:

NUMB without a care in my mind, I want to feel empty again, I want to go numb, I want to go back,

I want to go back to my deep, my deep sleep, you must not weep, for I am dead and I must sleep,

I want to be dead, I want nothing, just to be,

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Answer #1

The darkened silence, Your heart beats the music, A wondering thought, Your head lying on my chest, A thought of death long past, The depravation gone, The winds last song, The details I noticed, Long unsought, The love I show, The strongest blow, An anointed uncertainty, Lost to your kiss.

Answer #2

It sounds like something that would go well with heavy metal music. I like :)

Answer #3

i think it was very good and also ithink if you keep going you will go somewhere

Answer #4

Sounds creepy but keep on keeping on. You may be a star one day

Answer #5

lol ok nice i am writing music

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