What do you think of this poem? What do you think it means?

The thoughts of this end they contain us Drowning us in the secrets of our mind Their grip only ends when we give in Never to think again

Speaking never to be heard Cold metal knows the grip it has These secrets have a special sting Bringing happy thoughts to think

What thoughts so controlling Lolling deep inside The wounds of past regrets They suffocate and scar

I try to take this breath Their hands collapsing my chest I push away and reach for air My lungs are burning now

Who be the tormenter of my days The puzzle I put out A crimson path to my end Where secrets seep from veins

The eyes to my mind are closing With them go secrets held The life of me is dying Only when we give in

Answer #1

sounds like there are people hurting or trying to kill the ‘n’ a bit of a dark poem.

Answer #2

OH MY GOSH that is the most beautiful, and I dunno what ele poem I’ve ever read, I dotn have anything else to say exept I wish you’d show me how you write things so beautifully!!! Oh and as for the meaning im thinking something to do with drugs maybe…

Answer #3

was that really me?

Answer #4

keep up the good work.

Answer #5

very nice, I write myself and I enjoyed it. I havent studied it hard yet but maybe regret or fear having to do with lost love. or love’s. the women that haunt our past.

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