What do you think about this.. Thing. Lol please read and tell me?

I wanna give this to my boyfriend.. What do you think? Be honest, I dont mind if your mean about it. Just want honesty.

(his name here)

-hugging you is like drowning in the ocean. I feel as if my heart stops, and my body feels nothing but your arms around me. I feel lost, but un-wanting to be found, for I feel perfect right there with you. Also..

-kissing you is like sitting on a cloud a million feet above land. I have no worries, I have no fears. Its as if there is no one in the world but you and I. And then..

-your smell, its like ecstasy. Its addicting. My most favorite place to be is no longer the park were the beautiful water flows.. Rather, in your arms were I can smell you, rest my head on your shoulder, and listen to your heart. For..

-your heart-beat is like the most perfect harmony to my most favorite song. Though sometimes the beat is uneven, but that makes me giggle. But as I was saying.. About the song, my most favorite song is your voice..

-your voice is like the thunder, not harsh though.. Its soothing. Its beautiful, and it harmonizes with the rain. And the rain being your eyes..

-your eyes are like the rain pouring down on me. They make me melt when you look at me with your calm, relaxed look that can make any and every girl just collapse at the sight. Which leads to..

-your touch. I feel as if you catch my every pain, my every worry. You make everything ok. You make everything perfect. And then, last but deafeningly not least..

-your smile. Its simply indescribable. There are no words for it.. It amazes me every time the corners of your mouth point upward. Its beautiful, its gorgeous. Your perfect.

I love you now and forever baby! Love, Ema-bear

Answer #1

Well all depends, I think you are sure about liking this guy, what about him? if so and you know him really well, you know us guys, some percentage take this real overwhelming but if we like the girl, it is welcome.

Answer #2

First of all that’s soo amazing! You have real talent. If your boyfriend is sweet, caring, and very open, honest, and loyal to you give it to him. If he’s kind of a player or not that close or not a loving/caring person don’t. It all depends on your boyfriend. In general he’ll probably love it, I do! xoxo Nikki

Answer #3

Wow, did you seriously write all that? because that’s great! Um, well really I think it just mainly depends on the kind of guy he iz. I think he’d love it though.

Answer #4

It’s great give it to him

Answer #5

Give it to him!!! that’s beautiful, you’re a really good writer :)

Answer #6

Yes give it to him!! This is amazing!

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