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Please continue my poem...if possible

When I hear the three magical words of you I feel a sweet pain inside!!is this love??when you touch me I feel shy but want you to touch me!is this love?when I see the rain I miss u,that time I see the rain is falling from my eyes!!is this love?when I close my eyes I can see you,can see you smile is this love?

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Answer #1

I agree with erasmus27. Your poem is good and very unique to you. I have wrote poems from time to time but my style is completely different from yours. I thought about what should come next and I couldn’t come up with anything that would fit. Sometimes you just got to think on it for awhile. It will eventually come to you.

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Answer #2

When I hear the three magical words of you I feel a sweet pain inside!!! Is this love? When you touch me I feel shy But want you to touch me! Is this love? When I see the rain I miss you That time I see the is falling from my eyes!! Is this love? When I close my eyes I can see you Can see you smile Is this love?

I don’t think that anyone can write anymore unless its you. I was about to add to it but my style of poetry writing is different then yours. I don’t think it would have the same meaning as what you wrote came from the heart. You should keep it how it is and maybe add to it as times goes on.

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