Hearbreaker, feedback?

My life is now a shattered glass the pain I feel I cannot compress the lies you’ve told the truths you’ve stole are all now gone forever more what can I say when you run away the time it takes for you to say that your the heartbreaker love breaker heart faker don’t you try and think of me.the truth is I can’t really stand you.and the pain that I feel is oh so real and the lies I’ve said to hold the truth back are all not real and the time has come for me to say that tommorows here not today because I’m a heart make rcare taker don’t you try to steal that from me.all I can say is that that was yesterday and the pain you’ve caused will never go away the truth is I love you you love me and this love we share is forever you see?the time has come for me to say we will not lie ever again.thanks for reading. I will not try to make anyone upset but if I do just tell me. Sorry for the person named stopandthink. I am dedicating this to my friend named larry. Thanks. Give some feed back. Good bad? What do you think?

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Answer #1

thank you stefanie. I want to know if I should keep posting poems online.

Answer #2

I think this a great way to get your feelings out.