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Dumb poem thingy...need to know if it's worth turning in?

Okay well we had to write a poem in reading and the topic was optional. Since I am in 8th grade and middle school is almost over, I decided to write about that. What do you think? Sure it’s only been 3 yeras , But the thought of leaving gives me fears. Where is my life taking me? Can this really be? Everything has been so fun, Can my adventure really be done? It’s all happening oh so quick. The thought almost makes me sick. These next 4 years will pass us by. It almost makes me want to cry. No more inmature middle school things, Only sophisticated high school outings. Why does everything have to change? Why can’t things just stay the same? Maybe these nest few years wont be so bad, But the thought of leaving is awfully sad. I guess now we have no choice, It’s time to stand up and speak our voice. It’s ending rather wi like it or not Might as well go on and hold back the snot. So for now this is goodbye, It’s our turn to shine. No fears nor tears for we will come to visit But right now, we must expand out limits. We will walk out those old squeaky doors, And begin to enter our new word. -lily

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Answer #1

I lovee itt:]] I juss recently wrote a poem furr english but it was about somebody I like:]] lmaoo. well thats good juss use spell check. lol. byee!

Answer #2

that’s awesome ! it is absolutely worth turning in ! :D

Answer #3

omg that was really good it is worth it check your spelling though :]]] your a good poem writter

Answer #4

Prettty good(:

Answer #5

Thats great! :)

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