Do you like this poem.

The love we share, has made us one. From rising moon, to setting sun. On your wings, my heart does soar.

Across the sea and along the shore. Into the future and back to the past. The happiness we have will always last.

Answer #1

awww.. thats really good… did you write that?

Answer #2

I like it =]

Answer #3

I think it’s a little but… I don’t know unoriginal? no doubt it’s good. but your rhyming obvious words. like past and last, a five year old could do that. do for what people would expect!!

Answer #4

thats lovely

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