Do you like I just wrote it I need to work on it.

Is it because shes different? is it because shes not like you? how can you have the heart to put her down at the start? its not fair!

You were once there its all the same we havent changed at all dont use her tears and her fears for your laughs it cruel

its all a matter of time before you see her pain and rethink your thoughts and regret your actions your insucuritys got in the way so now shes stareing at her feet and her cheeks are turning red and your getting to her head Its not fair!

you were once there its all the same we havent changed at all dont use her tears and her fears for your laughs its cruel! Its not fair! its not fair!

is it because shes different? is it because shes not like you! Its not fair! you were once there its all the same we havent changed at all dont use her tears and her fears for your laughs its cruel!

Answer #1

Wow that’s really good :D I’d love to hear the music for it !

And the ‘staring at her feet, her cheeks are turning red’ That’s off an Avril Lavigne song ;)

It’s good though =))

Answer #2

I think it is ok I needs a little work but I like it a lot!:] good job!

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