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A love poem...

Of all the things I thought I knew I never realized how much I loved you

Your emerald eyes they gaze at me wanting to stay for eternity

When I wake and know you’re there God in the sky has answered my prayer

I pray that you will never leave I’m sorry for wearing my heart on my sleeve

But it’s important and you should know how much I love you and don’t want you to go

So, my darling I hope you stay I don’t want our love to waste away

Of all the things I thought I knew I never realized how much I loved you

thanks …

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Answer #1

I think the line that says “but its important “ is uneeded

Answer #2

woah, thank you, yeah, I do make them up myself. I dunno, I love writing… thank you :)

Answer #3

this poem reminds me of something what would sound really nice and sweet at a wedding, and can I just ask do you make them up yourself because if you do then you really do have a gift?xx

Answer #4

awww that’s sweet. but deep… a tad nauseating :-P

wanna hear my poem : – roses are red, voilets are blue, my ship sails tonight and there’s room for you HEHEHEHE

OI not hitting on you, its my lame poem :-P

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