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what do you think ???

ok so I JUST got dun writing this poem should I send it tomy editor or is it not so good mydad says yes but my lil bro says it sucked

Acceptance of darkness The heart of the sun The battle is over The people have won.

Aether of sunlight Dust of the stars Eyes against nothing Know nothing is far.

Blue opalescence That holds in the night Vanish forever In infinite light.

Eyes of the heavens Hand of the sun The old life is over A new has begun.

I would saywutit iz about but im kinda imbarased to

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Answer #1

I like it. I like it a lot.

Answer #2

tahts really goood

Answer #3

:(

Answer #4

that was real good send it send it send it :)

but it was good

Answer #5

Send it, it’s good(:

Answer #6

that wa really good, but I think yo shold leave it for about a week yahn come back to it and see if there is anything you want to add or change than when you are happy with it send it to your editor

Answer #7

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