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What should I name my poem?
ok I’ve been writing poetry and this is my newest one. I need help picking a title. some feed back would be nice! thanks… Note: this is copywritten… do not take my work or I will take legal action if I find out… thanks =D
You broke my heart,
so I tore hers apart,
she didn’t deserve it,
I was not being very smart,
there are things I now regret,
like ever making that threat,
even saying yes to her,
and some from when we met,
but I definitely still love you,
and I don’t regret the stuff we do,
and don’t you think for a minute,
that I have no idea – ‘cause I do,
I’m not just fooling,
I know what I’m doing,
just not by experience,
but I wont be drooling,
I do my research,
I know a maple from a birch,
I’ll know how to please you,
I know where to search,
plus its fun to tickle you,
and there’s other stuff we do,
I’ll have some fun,
but you’ll have lots of fun too,
that night we won’t get any sleep,
it’s not from sadness we will weep,
the memories will last forever,
but there’s somethings we will not keep,
I’ll make you feel only one thing – pleasure,
as long as you’re really sure,
you may be sore in the morning,
but in a few years we may be together in front of an altar,
saying our wedding vows,
everything decorated with ribbons and bows
then we turn and kiss,
clapping comes from people – rows on rows,
Hmmm… You know… I am thinking your screen name makes the perfect title for all of your poems… I think you should incorporate it into all of them… this one for example could be titled… LoveMachine… Hammering it Home the other poem you asked about could be… LoveMachine…Pounding Out the Tears A future title could be… LoveMachine…Because a Machine Don’t Get Tired
I might
awe that soo FU*KIN cute you should name it all 4 you lol
wow this is really good. why don’t you simply title it “loves demands”…
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