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Tears (Poem)

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Tears

A whole new day, but again they fall Tears of depression, but that is not all There tears of sadness, grieve, and pain There tears of loneliness, that never go away

The tears are caused by the past and now And the tears of the future will soon come crashing down Theres no way to stop them, no way to hold them back If there was a way, I’d be telling them to pack

I don’t want the tears no more no more blury eyes like before But I can never help it, theres just to much pain To much pain thats causing me to go insain

I just want them to stop No more drips, no more drops Just clear eyes, no more mess Just a happy smile, no more stress

So help me see the world so beautiful And help my soul become more coulorful Help me cry no more tears of pain And help my emotions become more sane

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absolutely amazing.

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