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I dont think this is good, but friends of mine told me to post it. They think its great and I think theyre just saying that. They said that if I get enough good reviews I have to enter it in this poetry contest at my school so…Dont review it good! Lolz, just playing. Tell me what you think.

Through this darkness I cannot see the light Through this fog I cannot see the rain

There is more than what I’m seeing There is more than I will ever understand

Will you be there Or is it all a dream A dream that I never want to wake up from

Will you find me past all the tears Will you need me when Im not there

I am blinded by time How impassive it has become

Now, remember, not all poems must rhyme so I’d like for my non rhyming poem to not be rated for its non rhyminess. I was just playing around and was in no mood for poetry. Remember that.

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Answer #1

Nice one sis! =D haha see we told you so your poems were good..cough cough beautiful But you should consider being a poet as your career. I suck at it..maybe I need to read more O.o lolz Anyways if there are any new poems..please make sure to tell me okay? ;D

Answer #2

I like it. nice grammar!

Answer #3

nice. ;D I know most people( at my school anywayz) would critisize can’t spelll poems that weren’t all happy anf flippy, but I like it.

Answer #4

I like it.

prose- is what this is, and it doesn’t have to rhyme.

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