My poems

kay im a bit of an amateur sooo just tell me watchu think and be honest!!

The tears roll down and hit the cold floor I cant believe that there couldnt be more of our love our passion our hands that meet and as a I stare at us now we sparkle with defeat

So let the cold knife cut through the skin because you know that you cant begin to understand the pain that I’ve been through but you shud no my heart beats only for u.. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

ok this is another one…

Rain Rain go away bring me some sunshine 2 brighten my day Your winds and clouds are so very cold I cna almost remember warmth in his tight loving hold

In the shadows I can see a blinking light of what usedta be a friendship burning with light and fire and eyes full of hope, love and desire

Why, o why would a raincloud follow me? A girl who was blind and couldnt see That hate and lies were coming her way to push her aside into darkness and out of the day

All the pain he had caused me and everything that he did that brought nightmares to me The bruises, the cuts, the bites that bleed are promisese for more when he walks through the door to blame me for his deeds

TELL ME WHAT you THINK!!!

Answer #1

hey are dese for me or something because: “dawm girl you, are my world like any bird have two wings you and I are the wings of the dove yet 2 fly high above the sky your smile… “ wait hold up I’m not writing no more but answer me ‘was that for he, or 4 me

Answer #2

dam der awsom

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