more poetry about my stupid life

For every moment of happiness, there are 5 moments of misery. Everytime you fly a hundred feet, you’ll fall 500 feet into the ground. After all this time of hiding and seeking, what have I found? Everytime I’m smiling, in the mirror there’s a frown. And everytime I walk the perfect road, I always turn around. I always find myself in the same place, with the same expression on my face. Maybe all the places I check for positivity, is actually as far away as it could be. I can’t just have enough faith to just run without thinking I’m running the wrong way. Farther from everything I’ve ever had, farther from every I could ever have. I keep thinking that it’s not all so bad, but it’s to the point where I can’t even laugh. I can’t laugh at myself when I fall anymore, I can’t smile when an angel comes to help me, becuase I could never trust a single one of them. I’m against myself, and I’m against the world. So where is help from here. Where is help, when theres nothing left but fear. I’ve become crazily insanely f*cking mental. And I’m just hoping maybe next time I fall, it won’t be as gentle.

Answer #1

This is an amazing poem. I love it.

Answer #2

this is one of the most true things I’ve read all day

Answer #3

you are an amazing poet, so real and just all around amazing. someday there will be a book full of your works, and I will def. buy that book.

Answer #4

no offense but I’m getting sick of people making all there poetry about sorrow and pain. this is just another group of words that are meant to send the message that you are alone and everything is sad. Try making a poem about something people can relate to that inspire them to do something. not smother them with emotions of dread.

If you can make a poem that help express the journey and light that life is, then that’s a poem to be proud of. not this … this paragraph.

Answer #5

wow thats an awesome poem

Answer #6

pfft don’t listen to that douche iknwbest ! Your poems are amazing especially this one its my fave one who cares if its about sorrow its your feelings and no one can tell you what to feel..your an outstanding poet this poem is srsly one of the best poems I’ve read in forever…really good job man.

Answer #7

Well written.

Answer #8

wow…thats awesome

so honest and flowing…

Answer #9

dude I feel the same way thats why I am going to rule the world and all that stompd me out all that opposed me al that made me fall down the stairs to heaven shall die this is the time for revenge the time for anger to take its role the time for chaos disorder its the time for WORLD DOMINATION

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