is this a deceent poem?

hhhm try this one it’s a bit truer to the original but I hope you’ll find it flows better.

through a thousand oceans ill swim to you (swim instead of come) just to hold you up when you fall

not a thousand words can decribe the way I feel for you or the crazy things I would do just to be nearer to you

I could make your darkness fade away I could help you come alive (you’ve gotta be consistant either could or can) just let me be with you just let me try

(either take to love you out or the pace inbetween) for all you know is not enough for there will be a day and a time when my wisdom will out grow yours

because loneliness is dread because to live in this world and never have known you id rather to never had lived at all!

I dunno its an ok edit but it could have been better.

I have another suggestion, leave the poem for a while than come back in a week or so and see if there is anythng you want to change.