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do you love me?

if you leave me I will start to cry if you leave me I will start to fly away from here away from the pain

I ask that you not treat me that way so that I can be myself tell the truth and leave this he*l

come to me say you care the truth is that you wouldn’t dare say that you love me tell me you care

I am here trying to say if you leave me here today I will never forgive you never again love you nevr say oh no please stay

do you like it? is it good or bad? this poem has no one to be dedicated to but this heartless world its self. please reply LOVE ALWAYS EMODANCER

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Answer #1

That reminds me of that song by Buckcherry, because both your poem and the lyrics to that song both sound like a kindergardener made that up. You need to put some feeling into it…you don’t have to make it ryme like Dr.Susse!

Answer #2

wow, spoken from the heart as usual. that is pure poetry. anyway, this world is cruel, I’ll give you that. seems that you and I are the only two people that see it. that makes it even sadder. anyway, very talented.

with love, Punkrocker4ever

Answer #3

Is so deep. Very incredible , but the world isn’t so bad always..they are beautiful things in it. Cruel can be sometimes, but we can see the good in it. When we suffer we strive to be better, to go ahead. You are talented with poetry. If I told you my story sometime, you would be surprised ofhow I am smiling everytime no matter what…”because is better to smile than to cry, and tha if you give a smile to somebody it is contagious..it would smile too”.;)

Answer #4

this is amazzing! I love the plot and its so catchy! ima read it again :D <333

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