How can I describe the feeling of maternal death in my book?

In my book the woman dies of a Maternal death but i’m having trouble describing it … can any writers help me write it?

Answer #1

well you could say “ though all the pain she slowly starts to drift away, getting weaker by the minute with that one fatal push her breathing becomes softer the beating of her heart slows right down to a dead stop.” something like that

Answer #2

oh my gosh that’s great ! You don’t mind if i use this do you?

Answer #3

nah it fine and thanx I hope your story goes well :3

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