Critique the first chapter of my book?

If you’d like to give advice on my writing, please comment this so I could send the first chapter through funmail. I’d really appreciate it because I’m trying to get it published and would like feedback, thanks!

Answer #1

I’d critique it. :).

Answer #2

ill read it

Answer #3

I’ll read it too or, at least, try to read it.

Answer #4

ill critqe your chapter

Answer #5

I’d like to read it. thx

Answer #6

id do it if you wanted me 2… I proofread all my friends essays and stuff for school and I get like 99% of their mistakes

Answer #7

I want a copy even tho im only in 8th grade… lol

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