With You-a poem

thx:)

well that’s why I put it’s cheesy in there…

I agree it is cheesy, too many ‘I’s and ‘happy’s/

I love this peom. its awesome. I use to write poems. but I guess ill post a few of mine sometime soon to see what others think. thx!

yeah well what ev I write what I write so I just gues you could either like it or don’t.but thx on the good luck part.

I don’t write poetry anymore, I write academic essays, have written around 35 on English, History, Greek and Roman Civilisation and Education over the past 6 years.I read a lot of poetry and have studied it extensively, as an English graduate and English teacher. So I know good poetry and what it consists of. I personally didn’t like my poetry even though it was published in various collections, when I read great poets such as Keats and Shakespeare I have no need to write my own, I prefer to appreciate timeless poetry. Too many people call themselves ‘poets’ when they are not worthy of the word. And I don’t consider myself one.

well I just write, I don’t care what people think, if I think it makes sense and I like it enough to show it to poeple then, what ever I’m gunna put it up and if other people don’t like it then, that’s ok, they have their own opinion.