Who thinks this is a good starter to a story?

yeah it’s great!!! so much better than what I can write :) funmail it to me when you finish please :)

did you ever get the next part? funmail me if you did!

great! thats so cool.

The first thing I noticed about him were his eyes. I thought it was pretty remarkable that so many different shades of blue were reflected in them. Kind of like the ocean, But from that moment I could feel that he was much deeper than any Ocean I’ve ever seen. You cannot glance in his direction without locking your gaze into his. He had a unique way of capturing your mind for a moment and making it seem like years.

Just a suggestion lol. I don’t know…

Good idea

I like it, but you might want to change the word remarkable to something else. Maybe amazing or something. I like it though!

cool. and thanks guys :)

take your time I got at least 15 years left in my life :D

very nice im instantly into it!

ok can’t wait to hear the rest of it :) just funmail when you finish it

sure. IF I finish it. will try though :)

thanks! yea actually it will be. There will be more coming, so watch this space

it sound perfect. :D sound like a story with a deep romance in it