who likes this song?

this is the third song I’ve written,,, lemme know watcha think

In the beginning/ it was just pretend/ but at 13/ I met this beauty queen/ who drove me into sin/ (intro) wish I could/ take back that desolate night/ when she said I love you/ and I said it’ll be all right/ at first that night/ filled my dreams/ with even more/ fantasy’s/ now when I think/ about that night/ it makes me see/ the mistakes of my life (verse 1) it plagues my past/ in everything I do/ it makes me want/ to run to YOU/ I see now that/ it controlled my life/ so please LORD please/ I need YOU tonight/ (chorus) if we go back/ a few months ago/ you’ll see I was high/ and thought life’s a joke/ until I met/ a junkie on the run/ who wishes he could change/ the things he had done/ he warned me now/ to change my ways/ so I broke down on my knees/ and I started to pray/ (verse 2) it plagues my past/ in everything I do/ I cant believe/ I lost sight of YOU/ I see now that/ it controlled my life/ so please LORD please/ be with me tonight