What do you think of my rap ?

What do you think of my rap ?

Been growing up in a dump this aint how it should be this life style aint good cant ya see I gotta head out this hood find some new st for me ? And my lifes been changing right before my eyes It seems like a dream but what if its all lies this sts for real theres no way it cant be true Il be rappin till I die you know how I do I’ve been to the illest parties they were off the chain Getting drunk all the time over and over again Cant get enough of this st see its so edicting who can blame me though the parties were so bihing (Chorus) Am just trying to change my life no more parties everynight Yea Am just trying to change my life no more smoking weed right Yea am just trying to change my life not gona carry anymore knifes Yea im gona live it how I want it to be x2 (Verse 2) Its funny seeing cops round 24/7 I mean I fked up once but I was only eleven Messed up pretty bad didnt know what to do so me and my homeboys might be fked now too Its time for change no more livin in the past Jurt to prove now I’ve even quit smoking grass but nobodys perfect people livin a lie Cant you see am trying to live my peice of st life. (Chorus) (Verse 3) Its strange looking back at my life seein what I did wrong I should of went to school that day instead I hit that bong Eversince then its been downhill instead of working I decided to smoke and chill Cracked open a beer and rolled a joint I couldve went to work that day but didnt see the poin but that lifes behind me aint gona live it no more no more closing just opening doors (Chorus) (Verse 4) But theres still one problem something you cant see af been caged in this life a need to break free I tried that ney life st I didnt work out now am back selling weed to high school dropouts Its hard on the streets theres no one you can trust but you get used to it eventully you ajust You start carrying a gun it makes you feel safe We all know it doesnt come on for gods sake But theres still one thing I dont want this life its the only thing I know but its not worth the fight. (Chorus x2)

Answer #1

its seems ok…maybe if I heard you rappin it, it might sound much better

Answer #2

yea if I heard it it wood b better but just readin it… it was still pretty good, I rap a lil bit ya no, but I aint nuttin special

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