What do you think of my 1st full rap song

I was growin up in a small town with nutin to do Always takin st from people, who the fk are you We got all these rules see we dont abide by them so whats the point in havin them if we dont stand by them Start hearin how people dont beleive in me I just want to say peace to all the people ya see Im gonna be famous take a look at me Mother fkers here I come , so fresh to be (Chorus) I got a point in life always takin never givin took things for granted now I see I wasnt thinking I want things to be normal,no more guns and knifes I want to big house,sweet car living the good life (Verse 2) When my heads so full of st I cant think A just sit in my room thinking of all the bad st and start putting down ink Its possible to make a change if your willing to pay your way but oppertunities dont come around everyday If you want to do something go out and do it a wanted to do something a have to admit No one else can tell you this it comes from my own experience Living liee with no fear rappin and drinking beer who’d of thought my rhymes would get me all the way here. (Chorus) (Verse 3) Does it matter if I go to school every fking day to learn st am not gona use anyway I gotta keep it real you know how I do Theres no point in going so come follow me too Im living life on the edge,man this aint how it should be I gotta get paid the big bucks ya’ll feel me But being famous is the only way to be imma follow my dreams and neves gonna give up Bih im the fking king so ima mess this st up (Chorus) (Verse 4) You should know I’ve been livin this life too long everything I’ve done so far’s been wrong Somehow I lost my courage along the way I seem to lose sence of right and wrong everyday Mabey I just got led astray Whats the point in life whats the meaning of living always takin and never givin You dont like how am livin we’ll fk you am a bad motherfker a’l beat you black and blue As am trying to get my life sorted its like a got transported back into the world of love and hate f**k naw back into the world of guns and caine (Chorus x2)

So what do you think of my 1st full rap be honest and truthful thanx peace ?