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 As I pack, I speak urgently with nathan

“so your mom is going to marry you off”? Nathan asks. “ yeah pretty much. I just cant believe she is marrying me off to some guy I dont even know”
I pack the last of my belongings into my backpack. “mom says you could visit me but she would first put an army to make sure we dont kiss” I say. He abruptly pulls me close to his chest. “I am going to miss you so much” he says.” so am I” I reply. We kiss passionatly. I dont talk to mom. I am still mad at her. I mean;how can she just tell me so I dont know ,quick? Thirteen and married.ha! What a joke! “look there is what used to be ilokos” mom says. I look out the window. I got to admit it is very pretty. “do you know from what we desend from”? I ask.”greek ,infact all of our family is greek;all of us where born here including you”mother says. Wow I was born here? At least I am returning to my home land I think. The plane lands and I realize I am going to live in crete

 What will happen next? Who will kara's husband~to~be be? An ugly or a handsome man? Ya gotta read next chapter to find out!