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Is love really screaming and fighting and kissing in the rain? Is love me and you? Is love you and me? How can you see me when I left years ago? How did you see my heart when I was down? How did you see my heart when I had a frown? What do you dream about when you’re asleep? What goes through your head when you talk to me? What is that look on your face which say’s you’ve done nothing wrong? When I’ve known all along when I’ve seen through that look when I’ve heard those thoughts that you cheated that my heart beated that you walked away when I said “ go away “ when I said “ I loved you “ when I said “ I hate you “ when we cried in the rain “ I can’t play this game with you anymore “

I hope you like it I’ve worked on this for hour’s

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Answer #1

very rythmic, almost singable. some tautology, but otherwise very masterfully done.

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