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To That Special Girl

In the cold, underneath a tree, I’d drink from the river in the rain. I’d cry out, with all of my pain, “My God! Can you hear me out there?” He answered me like in veign, “My man! I’m always here. Without me, you’d live in fear.” Underneath that tree, I looked around to see, a place I could sleep that night. I called out with all my fear, “ My dear, where are you now?” Without a word, she opened up her arms, and held me with all her heart. She said, “Don’t ever let me go, or else this world around us will fall apart.”

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Answer #1

whom ever the “special girl” is… I sure hope this melts her heart! because, it’s so helplessly sweet and romantic! (:

Answer #2

that was sweet

Answer #3

I love it!!! it should be to me…

Answer #4

I really like it… its beautiful.

Answer #5

Aww, how special…Girls love things like that…To bad there’s not more guys out there like you.

Answer #6

Wow, that’s really good.

Answer #7

Amazing :D. So cutee and sweet

Answer #8

waaaw… that is sooo sweet of u, and I’m sure she’ll like it;) p.s: your a gr8 poet…keep it up

Answer #9

wow! that is so passionate! you should show that to whoever you wrote it to. she will really love it!

Answer #10

aw. its really sweet. just darling. C:

Answer #11

ok?

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