Possibly my darkest song - Feedback Please

This song is called Candle Lit,a friend of mine from school gave me the idea,her life is basically dark

Being stared at 24/7 just by the way I look and act Trying so hard to live a peaceful life but treated like I’m invisible Sometimes I just wonder if it’s worth even living for Surpassing my emotions around everyone cause I know it wouldn’t do a thing To change how they look AT ME!

(man on mega-phone “darkest days are soon to come”)

Candle lit room to make my happiness You all just don’t know what I go through on a daily basis You all see the light walking like you rich but yet it can’t make you happy The light is your friend but the darkness is my life and always lived in it Candle lit ROOM (3x scream)

So hard to ignore the mean remarks people make towards me under there breath They all think I’m deaf and can’t hear the stuff they say It’s jut a matter of time before they find out why I embrace the darkness While they just have no fuking clue what I’m going to do It will soon be that time mother fukers!

Candle lit room to make my happiness (3x) You all just don’t know what I go through on a daily basis You all see the light walking like you rich but yet it can’t make you happy The light is your friend but the darkness is my life and always lived in it Candle lit ROOM (3x scream)

(10 sec. turntable and light percussion solo)

I’ve embraced the darkness for so long Now it’s time I take you all with me straight to it’s heart After so much teasing and staring you’ll see what surprise awaits you down there Who now has the last laugh (2x) I do you mother fu*kers!

Candle lit room to make my happiness (4x) You all just don’t know what I go through on a daily basis You all see the light walking like you rich but yet it can’t make you happy The light is your friend but the darkness is my life and always lived in it Candle lit ROOM (3x scream)

These candles are what make me happy But seeing all you fu*kers suffer my same pain Makes even HAPPIER! It’s all about the darkness (2x)

Candle lit room to make my happiness (4x) You all just don’t know what I go through on a daily basis You all see the light walking like you rich but yet it can’t make you happy The light is your friend but the darkness is my life and always lived in it Candle lit ROOM (3x scream)

What did you think of my song? song written by maggot4