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Poem for English, how should I finish it?

have to write a sonnet for english, and this is what I have so far…

Blonde is his hair, the colour of sand, The sun sparkles in his eyes; Warm is the feeling when I hold his hand, He makes everyday a surprise. Smooth and pink are his cheeks, His smile lights up my day; He has an accent when he speaks, He is perfect in every way.

I still have to write 4 more lines like the ones above, like so the 1st line rhymes with the 3rd line, and the 2nd line rhymes with the 4th.

Then I wanted to finish it with .. *(something, something, something, something) Without him, im incomplete

Or something along those lines, can someone please help me out?? Thanks ( :

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Answer #1

The way he holds me close His touch so ever sweet I never want to loose that boy Without him, I’m incomplete

Hope that helps :) from Casey M

Answer #2

ok, well I finished it ..

blonde is his hair, the colour of sand, the sun sparkles in his eyes; warm is the feeling when I hold his hand, he makes every day a surprise. smooth and pink are his cheeks, his smile lights up my day; he has an accent when he speaks, he is perfect in every way. where would I be with out him, I really dont know he’s the only one I can trust; he makes my heart beat fast and slow, and never let it rust. one thing I know, our love is true, very much so, incomplete without you.

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