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I know this one is not good… but what do you think about it?

Overgrown Child

Maturity don’t come at a curtain age And it don’t come during a curtain stage Its how that one person thinks and acts And how they feel about knowing the facts You see, when you’re a child you only know the myths You believe that there true and that’s basically it But there’s so much more to maturity then knowing what’s true It’s about you outlook on life and how you let people think of you But sometimes maturity never comes And that’s what you call an overgrown child

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Answer #1

I think I know exactly what you mean with that poem…poetry is my life and that was really good so keep writting you can reach a lot of people with that…I can certainly relate to parts of this poem…aplause…

Answer #2

It’s really accually pretty good but I think that if we had more about the person that it’s about or what it’s even about because I don’t know it could be about something totaly different but it might mean more if we know what the meaning is behind it.

Answer #3

I like almost all of it, but that’s because I’m a big fan of rhyming. I can’t go without it in each poem that I write. It’s very nice, clear, and very true.

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