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My Poem: Now is not Forever

This is a poem I wrote while thinking of me and my boyfriends relationship. We arnt like the disgusting couple that tells each other they love them after a week. I love him very much, we have been dating for over 9months but neither of us are not inlove with the other. We do know look ahead and plan out our furture together because neither of us likes to look that far ahead. We see a long lasting relationship but who knows how long. We like to live us as it comes. So I thought this would be a good poem to suit us. Feedback, good and bad would be great :D ENJOY!

Now is not forever But now is perfect to me Now is not forever Though I hope now its only me you see

Now is not forever So lets live us day by day Now is not forever So lets live by the ‘I love you’s that we say

Now Is not forever But we laugh, we love, we learn Now is not forever Its an endless list we will earn

Now is not forever Though we stand hand in hand Now is not forever As we leave footprints in the sand

Now is not forever And we know this may be true Now is not forever But today is just me and you.

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Answer #1

I like, that, very meaningful, I especially liked the ‘as we leave our footprints in the sand’ part.

Answer #2

awww adorable:D

Answer #3

Omg that is SOOO cute!

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