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Is my poem good?

An illusion is frightning It frees some, But it also buries and suffocates And the cruelest thing, Is we never know Are we the free ones, Or are we grasping For lifes last breath

what do you think of my poem?

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Answer #1

it’s good

Answer #2

i love them all!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 them all!!! ^_^

Answer #3

A little awkward, but as a writer I tend to be picky. You are definitely on the right track.

Answer #4

awee… thanks! <3

Answer #5

looovee it babes

well done (Y)

O.x

Answer #6

I think its verii good!

&&very well written

good job (:

Answer #7

Good :-)

Try to get the rhythm smoother. Poetry is like singing, try singing your poem!

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