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My Poem

So for my class we have to write a poem and I wrote this one… Tell me what you think…

Your face arrives again All hope I had becomes surreal But under your cover’s More torture than pleasure And just past your lips There’s more anger than laughter Not now or forever will I ever change you I know that to go on I’ll break you, my habit

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Answer #1

its hard to understand, but im only 16 lol… and to me a poem should rhyme

but its still really really really good.

Answer #2

luv it ! :) poetry is beautiful and amazing and you don’t even have to unerstand it. and urs is good. :)

Answer #3

kind of hard to understand but its a good poem

Answer #4

Nice!

Answer #5

thats niceee.

:)

Answer #6

what is your poem about?

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