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My poem

Do you like this poem I wrote? tell me Honestly what you think about it.

Love… is caring for someone so much you’d die for them

Mistakes… are something you have yet to make up for

Anger… is an emotion that should be forgotten.

Happiness… is what we should live our lives with.

Hate… is what we live our lives with

Change… is what we can only hope we can do

what did ya think?

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Answer #1

Very Nice…

Answer #2

That’s a poem ? isn’t it supposed to rhyme a little at least ? lulz.

And to Lutz = Picasso could not paint or sculpt. And Andy Warhol was whom?

Answer #3

Amazing! That is really great. Change is something many people fear. Hate is something we should all remove and fight in our lives. Beautiful and inspiring poem.

Answer #4

this is good really good I am a future poet/song writer myself…I really like,it

Answer #5

its awesome sara! and its true! (: I love it!

Answer #6

Nice! I wish I could come up with poems that good. Mine stink.

Answer #7

it very nice

Answer #8

its really good, sara!! ^_^. wonderful!!

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