is this poem good??

I used to dance in the earth. From there I could preside in the toils. Feet on the ground, eyes captured by gold. Now, I run in the wind. Traverse through the trees, helpless but to endure. My bearings are gone, my stare is but confound, a tiny rattle of licidity I so await.

Answer #1

It’s a capturing piece of poetry, I like it.

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