I wrote this song for my rock band. it is copywrited I just want to see what everyone thinks. we just sstreet perform right now.
your making me do this you see right through I know just what you want but I wont give it to you
Get out of my house! Get off my floor! Shut your mouth And walk out out the door
Im not like the other girls that whine and complain I think you should run because im sure im going insane
nothing you say is going to change my mind your not as slick as you may think you are make sure you know that im one of a kind you better change your bad behavior
Get out of my house! Get off my floor! Shut your mouth And walk out out the door
one minute you want me and the next im not so sure that you even see im different from all the girls before.
(band solo.. then slow down again)
you better believe that in all ym grace ill still slap that look right off your face im still your honey I swhat you say its all in black and white and forget the shades of gray
Get out of my house! Get off my floor! Shut your mouth And walk out out the door
You act so great but I think its to late for your your alabies just telling lies!!!
so say goodnight and get out of my sight dont know how you can do this is this really the way you want to stear? no need to wait cause wont spill no tear
Get out of my house! Get off my floor! Shut your mouth And walk out the door.
yeah, it rhymes too much & it sounds like a poem. I guess it was okay?
Sounds a little too "Dr. Seussish". Not every two lines have to rhyme.
sometimes the rhymes is what makes a song solid, I liked it:]
I like it I think wit da right beat I think it will b hott
Looks more like a poem than it does a rock song
in my opinion, it rhymes wayyy to much