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I've been writing poems for a long time, but ussually about sadness and depresion... I decided to try a love poem... is it any good?
Distanced Love why let distance separate us, I wish there was a bus, from here to there, this just isn't fair,
I really do love you, but theres nothing we can do, except talk over the phone, but I still feel so alone,
without you I feel empty, I would run sea to see, just to see you, I wish there was something I could do,
I need to feel your embrace, so I know I'm not a disgrace, I wanna hold you tight, it would take all of my might,
just to let you go, the time we're apart goes so slow, when we're together I don't want you to leave, it's for you that I do grieve,
I cant wait until next time, we'll make are bodies rhyme, I'll savor every moment, when you leave I begin my decent,
soon my only emotion will be sorrow, I kiss from you I will borrow, you said your ready, I'll rub your belly,
then I'll work my way down, please don't let me see a frown, soon our bodies will connect, to me you look so perfect,
so if your ready to go, we'll take it slow, then pick up pace, this is no race,
I wanna enjoy every second, I don't want our time to be ruined, so when we're alone together, our time won't be bitter!
ok but I'm more into poems about depression and stuff like lost love, death, self injury, stuff I had to live with and am just getting over.
its nicw why dont you show us another one?
I like it
thanks