is my poem any good?

I’ve been writing poems for a long time, but ussually about sadness and depresion… I decided to try a love poem… is it any good?

Distanced Love why let distance separate us, I wish there was a bus, from here to there, this just isn’t fair,

I really do love you, but theres nothing we can do, except talk over the phone, but I still feel so alone,

without you I feel empty, I would run sea to see, just to see you, I wish there was something I could do,

I need to feel your embrace, so I know I’m not a disgrace, I wanna hold you tight, it would take all of my might,

just to let you go, the time we’re apart goes so slow, when we’re together I don’t want you to leave, it’s for you that I do grieve,

I cant wait until next time, we’ll make are bodies rhyme, I’ll savor every moment, when you leave I begin my decent,

soon my only emotion will be sorrow, I kiss from you I will borrow, you said your ready, I’ll rub your belly,

then I’ll work my way down, please don’t let me see a frown, soon our bodies will connect, to me you look so perfect,

so if your ready to go, we’ll take it slow, then pick up pace, this is no race,

I wanna enjoy every second, I don’t want our time to be ruined, so when we’re alone together, our time won’t be bitter!