I WROTE ANOTHER SONG!

I WROTE ANOTHER SONG. TELL ME HOW YOU LIKE IT.

LET OUR

I want you and I hope you want me to we belong together let us let this be true

I think of heaven when I think about you let me slip you in my pocket so we will always be two

we got it together our hearts are attached now all we have to do is put our bodys right back

[[chorus]]

let your skin touch mine let our lips be close our eyes are unbalanced but we know where this goes I cant hold back I have no control let our bodys be semetric and cary the flow

now I know this sounds crazy and we just met today but these feelings you give me take us to a place where we

[[chorus]]

let your skin touch mine let our lips be close our eyes are unbalanced but we know where this goes I cant hold back I have no control let our bodys be semetric and cary the flow

Answer #1

I like it. It’s really good.

Answer #2

Very nice! You should put a brigde in it though after the verse after second chorus so it builds up to the last one. All in all though it was great :)

Answer #3

I like it!

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