how's my poem?

Alarm Clock (hiatu)

Dawn wake sleepy towns, Now shinning through my window, Clear light wakes my day.

Answer #1

like it Im gonna post 2 of my short poems on here so people can comment on them.

Answer #2

I like it too

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