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For my kids and girl, I know I have, A special purpose, My maker did not, Make me worthless, I work all day, And work all night, My money’s quickly, Out of sight, In the pockets, Of those I owe, To pay my rent, To feed my home, It really sucks, That I stay broke, It’s like my job, Is just a joke, I try so hard, And still I fail, To move beyond, These bars of jail, In this cell, I am confined, This cell is life, This life is mine, Sometimes I really, Want to die, Until I see, My kids and wife, And then I feel, Like all is well, They rescue me, From the depths of hell/ Life is only, What you make it, Life’s a b*tch, Can you take it? Life is as beautiful, As you make it, I wish that I could, Never hate it…

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Answer #1

it’s a little rough, I just decided to write a poem, and this is what I came up with, I only spent like 5 min on it tho, so don’t be 2 hard on me lol

Answer #2

I like it, good work. Its short & simple but effective. I write poetry myself but am too shy to post it in a public forum such as this.

Answer #3

the poem got cut off and I didn’t even notice, I made a new post with the whole poem

Answer #4

yea lol thank you

Answer #5

aww thats a good one you write it?

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