I need a better line, can someone please help me! ok it goes like this... Yo we come from monroe were we play basetball like were pros mess with us we will mess you up
please help me we have to write a rap song for music class in order to pass!!!
Well, tell us a little about yourselves and what you want to say. What do you do? Do you have any problems? What are your goals, if any? What's your beef?
You need several better lines and we need to have something to go on. So far we know that your from Monroe (which isn't important) Maybe if you were from L.A. or New York. You play basketball (or basetball) and you want to mess someone up if they mess with you. That's just not enough and it's not good. First, just forget about what you already have. And, yes, check your spelling. Get back to us.
yeah ok I was typing to FAST and made a few mistakes.. but what about I am already dead inside my head you kill me in you sleep, with those words you never speek I'm alraedy dead I'm already dead inside my head
well... you might want to start with your spelling, perhaps... :p
hehe. ^^
(kidding, of course.)
