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Does this poem suck?

I knew there was a mountain, That I would have to climb Just so that I could see you. But I told you I didn’t have the time, You were begging me to free you Because my eyes were gorgeous, And nothing else could color your world. I told you that you should see beautiful things, Because you’re such a beautiful girl.” But you seemed to be an angel stuck in hell, Like a princess living on the streets. You deserved a better life, Perhaps a kingdom of heaven on the beach. I had been down for so damn long, And I wasted so much time. I loved someone, but I did it wrong, I never thought love could be a crime. But your perfection determined me To get back up on my feet. I wanted to be loved again, But I wanted to earn it, not to cheat. I thought I knew what love really was, Are learners able to teach? Because I’ll tell you everything, That I now know I shouldn’t have done. And I’ll tell you everything, You need to know to be my only one.

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Answer #1

this poem sucks balls.

Answer #2

I think its really good (:

Answer #3

its good.

Answer #4

yeah this poem sucks terrible. You think I’m really going to say that about something that is written this well and is as good as this? I like it keep up the good work. :)

Answer #5

this poems sucks big time!!! yo, like ew!!

haha sike!!! this is amazing hun, gorgeous poem, it got to me so it’ll get to any girl keep writing!! :D

Answer #6

It sucked so much I puked,SIKE!!!

It was amazing,one of the BEST poems I have ever read,keep going!!

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