Does anyone like this rock song I wrote?

I wrote this song for my rock band. it is copywrited I just want to see what everyone thinks. we just sstreet perform right now.

your making me do this you see right through I know just what you want but I wont give it to you

Get out of my house! Get off my floor! Shut your mouth And walk out out the door

Im not like the other girls that whine and complain I think you should run because im sure im going insane

nothing you say is going to change my mind your not as slick as you may think you are make sure you know that im one of a kind you better change your bad behavior

Get out of my house! Get off my floor! Shut your mouth And walk out out the door

one minute you want me and the next im not so sure that you even see im different from all the girls before.

(band solo.. then slow down again)

you better believe that in all ym grace ill still slap that look right off your face im still your honey I swhat you say its all in black and white and forget the shades of gray

Get out of my house! Get off my floor! Shut your mouth And walk out out the door

You act so great but I think its to late for your your alabies just telling lies!!!

so say goodnight and get out of my sight dont know how you can do this is this really the way you want to stear? no need to wait cause wont spill no tear

Get out of my house! Get off my floor! Shut your mouth And walk out the door.

Answer #1

man I love it I can so relate to it in a way keep writing songs!

Answer #2

I’m not going to lie. Awful.

You completely switch perspectives half way through.

You say: “you better change your bad behavior / Get out of my house!”

which makes it sound like your talking to your child, as though you’re their parent or something and then you go on to say: “Im not like the other girls / that whine and complain”, which makes you sound like a moaning teenager.

The lyrics don’t make sense and the song has no meaning. Don’t give up your day job.

Answer #3

I love that song because its so true and it would any a great song and it was awesome

Answer #4

Pretty cool lyrics love it Sounds like it would a very good song =D Best of luck with it X x X

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