Comments on my writing?

Alone and waiting, blankly staring,

Waiting for the day

Breathless sighing, what am I doing?

Nonsense, just living…

I don’t wana question fate

No I don’t wana question faith

But it’s going there

Just prove me wrong and swear

That u’ll take me soon in your arms

Secure my life in your palm

I don’t wana doubt no more

Clueless feeling, destructive thinking it’s just ruining me…

Clouds are graying, loudly crying proudly raining

Stop! You’re crying out to me

What about the dirt you’ve thrown to be?

Strength is what I need strength you didn’t give

Just take me, get me, wake me and u’ll see

I’m just alone and waiting slowly drowning

But yes, I know u’re there…

Answer #1

I LOVE it . your realy good at poetry.

Answer #2

goood

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