Childhood (poem)

This poem my friend wrote… I liiike it. I know the rhyming can be a lil better but I liiike it lots. What do you think?

Childhood – by Jared

When I was growing up I carried my little plastic cup There was only a little water in there It was getting filled by the years

Those are the best years of your life Remember them with pride x3 You only have one chance to be a kid

Now that I’m twelve and I’ve learned how to spell 20 words that make no sense Life’s getting better for the best The cup’s still getting filled by the years

Those ate still the best years of your life You gotta remember them with pride x3 Your chance to be a kid is gone The time is up Forever

Now that I’m an adult Always working, always my fault On the decisions that I have made Some good and some of The dumbest I have ever made

Get up in the morning, now I’ve gotta shave No time to enjoy life on the run That cup is filling up so fast now I can’s hold on any longer

This is the end Now that my chance is forever gone And death is awaiting Me at the end of The tunnel

What you think???